Sometimes, is it personal?

Question: Sometimes, is it personal!?

You think it's the air
and the space around you
that stills itself and stops
you
from moving
or thinking
and a new silence forms
that only you can hear,
washes of space
and a parcel of gentle dance
sways the soul
until it breaks
from the beat
of a gushing heart
your love
your smile
your wife !.
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Now, I wouldn't have minded being asked to rate THIS poem!.
Not leaden with metaphors or obfuscated with long words (like "obfuscated") but simple and sincere!. 10/10!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Ok stop it before I throw up!.!.!. I don't know what generic brand of greeting card you copied that off of but next time could you at least violate the copy write of a Hallmark card or the Penthouse forum, something worth reading please!? Thanks in advance for taking our feelings into consideration!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This brought to mind Knut's words,
"a small joy possesses one so that one retires into a private happiness"!.!.!.!.!.!.
"my heart beats gently towards it,"

Go, retreat, enjoy, follow the beat of your heart!.

maWww@QuestionHome@Com

With one circle in the air, you brought the Jumbo-jet in a gentile swift landing!.Who 'd still write such a poem about the( beloved) wife ! A nice reminder in our hard times !. Thanks!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Well done sir!.
and if I am not mistaken, congratulations and best wishes are in order!.
You, like myself, have found a Saint!.
They must be to put up with us eh!?
;)Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love it but am I supposed to believe that!? Really kidding that's absolutely beautiful and I am not a romantic person!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

good night, Ammo, see you tomorrow,Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very good !.!. Hope you sit by candle light and quote some of your meaningful poems to her!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow, very nice, Buk!. Your wife must be a constant source of inspiration for your romantic poetry!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

It won't matter unless you shower first!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Lovely!
You tender heart you!Www@QuestionHome@Com

You are very romantic!. Your wife is blessed to have you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You are feeling romantic today aren't you!? Nice poem as always!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

yes sometimes it is!.!.!.!.

great poem!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

hell yes, sometimes it's personal!.

Lovely poemWww@QuestionHome@Com

Maybe I could get me a good woman to stay if I could be poetic like that!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Lovely, just lovely!.!.!.Patti is a special lady!. Love honeyWww@QuestionHome@Com

WOW! good poem!Www@QuestionHome@Com

so, i guess our wedding is off!.!.!.!. clearly you like her better, that was beautifulWww@QuestionHome@Com

That's really good :DWww@QuestionHome@Com

I am TD Euwaite, and I approve this message!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You have much to be thankful for!. This is your fortune cookie!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Not my wife!.!.!. she's an ungrateful person that gets joy out of my misery!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Who wrote that!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

OMG Buk Have you swallowed a poetry book!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.that was lovely!.!.!.!.!.!.xWww@QuestionHome@Com

Ahhhh, now that's really sweet dear boy!. Bravo once again!. LOLWww@QuestionHome@Com

That was beautiful Buk!. I am sure she will love it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It is ALWAYS personal!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, very!. Great poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Beautiful! Www@QuestionHome@Com

i almost puked on the keyboardWww@QuestionHome@Com