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Question: Rate my poem piiiiiiz!!!!?
im a guy so ive got that handycapXP
it is called "infected"
youre eyes are like a sweet injection of the love infection!.!.!.
oooh!.!.!.!.
im infected by youre sweet complextion!.!.!.
its an infection that gives me a high like no other kind!.
!.ifeel like i can fly!.
the love infection!.!.!.im infected!.!.
oooooh!.!.!.
so ive collected all my effections for this love infection!.!.its effected me in an abnormal way!.!.!.NO I WONT CURE IT !!!! I WONT LET IT GO AWAY!!!
ill indure it!.!.!.!.no one can cure it!.!.!.!.i wont let it go away!.!.!.!.
when you smile it makes me feel this way!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Find a good, repetitive 'tune' to belt it out to, and you have a hit! You're gonna be a STAR! For utter meaninglessness, I'll give it a 10!Www@QuestionHome@Com
i cant figure out the steady beat to this so im guessing its a song!. and for a song, its pretty d a m n good!. Im usually harsh about poems and stuff but this is good except i think you should change the word "abnormal" to "submissive"Www@QuestionHome@Com
O my goodness wow, This is so deep, People can almost feel what you wrote if they read it!. From 1 to 10 I'd rate it a 10!. I think it's a good poem, very romatic!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
sounds like really good lyrics for a hip hop or even a rock song!.Www@QuestionHome@Com