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Question: All POETS, Bring your Best :D!?
What happens is that you write a peice of poetry in a standard 8 line spiel!. The most imaginative or well written one will get 10 points; heres my example

Mystical dreams
Floating around me
Fairies & vines
Of a hollow tree
Running and skipping
Through my imagination
Mystical dreams
Betray my hallucination


Have Fun!!!
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Light fades
Shadows all fall
Slowly sinking
The water becomes me
Pressure amounts
The body feels numb
The light appears
The mind awakes!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I would love to reply here with a shorter work of mine but none of my poems are eight lines long!. If you'll expand your rule to ten or less I'll post a ten-liner I've written that I'm proud of!.

EDIT: You didn't say yes so I'll post this one eight-liner I've written:


Keeping Score


Some play it for amusement
and seek adventure only!.
Some play it for revenge and
some play because they’re lonely!.
Some play to just play along
and they play the game badly!.
But most play the game too long
and end the game too sadly!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

How imaginative this be
This task you have assigned
I thank you for inviting me
You are so very kind
Should you like to hear my verse!?
Then I shall wrack my brain
But there be no time for rehearse
You'll have to try again

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Eight standard lines
The usual spiel
Imagine and write
Get 10 points as
Well and you might
Wow the fans
Take your bow
Slings or Arro-Www@QuestionHome@Com