These are two poems that i've written!.!.!. what do you think!?
This i think is my best one ever!.
Sylvan Sin
She gazes longingly
at that voluptuous apple!.
so round and so red,
she wants it!.
He whispers
sweetly, slithering slowly
toward her ear,
Take it Eve, go on, take it!.
The gentle curves
and shiny skin
invite her in
to take a bite!.
She needs it!.
Go on Eve, HE won’t be mad,
he whispers again!.
She draws closer
fingers extended!.
Closing them around the delicate peel
she bites into the succulent flesh!.
Ecstasy!.
He smirks and laughs a low chuckle
So easy, he says
As he slithers away
This one i just wrote today, and i think the ending is a little off so tell me what you think!.Thanks :)
Intoxication
The smoke from your fancy French cigarette
drifts through my nose, making my head swirl!.
It’s nice!.
The 20 dollar glass of wine
burns as it slides down my throat!.
I like it!.
The over expensive meal you bought me
settles in my stomach making me feel satiated and settled!.
Good!.
Your musical voice
floats into my ears and puts me at peace!.
Amazing!.
Those eyes that you gaze so intently at me with
make me feel like I’m on top of the world!.
No!.
This isn’t good!.
I shouldn’t feel this way…
I can’t help it…
This addiction…
It’s not, it can’t be…
Not…
Love!.
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