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Question: Please rate my poem and tell me what you think !?
i wrote this back in june 19, 2007!. at 1st i was skeptical, it was writtten for a friend b/c she wrote a depressing poem nd didn't feel well, but looking at it now a year later, i really like it!. how about you!? thanks !! >_^

Drops of May Weather Storms

I know your pain
Although I don't know what's happening,
I can still feel the vain!.
Seems like the beginning is the ending

One moment there's bliss
It feels much like a wet kiss!.
But out of nowhere you see a mirror,
"It felt so real," as you stand there alone!.

You try to make sense of it all;
Yet everything begins to fall!.
"AHHHH!" you scream to the top of your lungs!.
Your blue eyes are running waterfalls!.

It hurts me to see a single tear,
You're not the only one to hide in the room!.
Swallow your tears, don't let it drop,
A splash will only cause more bitter props!.

But like I say,
Tomorrow will always bring another day!.
So Faith, throw away your thorns,
anticipating a happy God-given next day!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Oh my gosh!
That was a 9 out of 10!
That should be published!! :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Awhh, its so cuteee!. (:
I likee how it ryhmes but I can't pick up a distinct pattern!.
I'm sure if I looked for it I could find it but it's not really obvious!.

It really is adorable and caring!. (:
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I personally think this a really really lame poem, where lines barely make sense just so they can rhyme!. It screams amateur, and much of it is nonsensical!.Www@QuestionHome@Com