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Question: Have you seen this before!? Granny's rap!.!?
Hi, folks I posted this some time ago!.!.!.!.no one responded, so I checked it out!.!.!.!.not there (if it shows up twice I apologise)

My lot in life
in my allotted span
is to do what I can,
to be what I am!.
I am the sum of all my parts!.
Heart, mind and soul!.
My role!?
My ultimate goal!?
Simply to seize the day
Throw nothing away!.
To enjoy my slotted span!.
To prolong
for as long as I can
this life, in all its majesty!.
No travesty, pure rhapsody!.
Clasping me,
supporting me
through the highs and lows!.
God alone knows
where everything goes!.
Tomorrow may bring sorrow,
but, I know that joy
will follow!.
Diurnal and eternal
Light and darkness,
darkness and light!.
My place in the scheme of things!?
To soar with golden wings,
to savour what life brings!.!.!.!.!.
Is this why my heart sings!?



(I like these hydropro things!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.not part of rhyme, just a comment!)
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Go G Jill go
Listen to her throw
Down the sound
Life going round
Straight to the heart
The place to start
The day off
Don't lay off
Just stay off the dark
Days in the park
Sing meadowlark
Lemon sweet words
From the birds
Blue bird that brings
G Jill her wings
So she can fly

I'm out
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Love it Thank you for that!.There is one that refers to someone who comes to you when they are in need and then when all is well do not bother to call that I really like!.
I give you this present!.
It did not cost me anything!.
Hold it feel it caress it!.
When you have opened it and find you do not want it!.
Do not throw it away!.
Put it in a cupboard for one day you may find you will need it!.
The present is my Heart

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Take it to the streets, sister, sing it loud! This is a wonderful format, and you amaze me constantly with your versatility, from the classical forms to the emulation of the greats to random street rhyme!. I love it!. Thank you for your constant inspiration!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i do enjoy all poetry and i like that aswell its slightly different,it flows well,i got a bit muddled ,towards the end,but like said its meant,but there again i will never make a good rapper,i agree life is to short with to much hurt and pain,we have to make the best we can with whatever we do have,peAce!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Jill, you never cease to amaze me!. As Elaine pointed out, your versatility and creativity is just astounding!. Your poetry is never dull!.
Excellent job!.!.!.lots of fun!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Little ole lady from Pasadena!.!.!.!.
Go Granny, go Granny, go Granny, go!.!.!.!.
Grannyjill has a shiny red super-stock pen instead of car!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You rock, Granny!

Your versatility amazes me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is WONDERFUL!
Very inspirational rappin' Granny!.!.!.
*Peace*Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yo Go the Gran! Dig it I do! You got the swagger on this one!. Excellent! Word! Fully sick! (that's VERY good GJ)Www@QuestionHome@Com

RAP on Granny !.!. RAP on!.!. It looks good on you!
(I am tapping out!.!. my muse is done gone)
Your creative talent is soaring! I love it !Www@QuestionHome@Com

High five Grannyjill!Www@QuestionHome@Com

You da bomb!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Carpe diem indeed!. Nice to try other forms isn't it!? Www@QuestionHome@Com

Granny J!.!
you go girl,
what a pearl,
rhyme sublime
to wake up to
brighten up my day!
Yay!
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You may have given a reason for living - "to do what I can, to be what I am"!. How often one searches - for the ultimate reason for their life - when the answer may be a simple statement - to be what I am!. Thank you, Granny ?Www@QuestionHome@Com