Critique My New Poem: Whirlwind of Love?

Question: Critique My New Poem: Whirlwind of Love!?

Once I got caught in
whirl whirl wind of love
I fell down, down, down
and love, love, love
kept me down, down
When whirl wind subsided
My heart was wreck, wreck, wreck
Now, I am in love, love, love
Love will remain for ever
We will remain together
For ever, ever and everWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I like it, once again something different, and I believe everyone should strive to come up with new ways to express their feelings!. Repeating certain words, give a poem a more musical swing!.

However, every song has a chorus, a point where the one singing or listing can pause!. I don't hear that in your poem!.
I would add another down after "kept me down, down" to amplify the musical sound and rhythm!. This creates a small pause (three times three repeating words) and emphasizes the next line: "When whirld wind subsided!." You could also lengthen that line, or add a second one!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

lol I have to say this poem is not like the others i have read!. I guess everyone have their own way of expressing their heart!.Www@QuestionHome@Com