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Question: Would you please comment !?
I am in a state of utter confusion
brought about by the guilt and despair
and certainty that Life is illusion
so real and so cruel, often so unfair !.
I blame myself for things I said,
and I blame the relentless doubt
that crept insidiously and mad
over my reason, that cries and shout!.
That Illusive forgiveness so rarely
inhabits the cold hearts of Humankind,
for forgiving is greatness, especially,
if the guilty are noble and kind!.
I let not darkness somber my day
for true happiness just dwells so near
imploring attention, especially today,
and I smile at Life so sweet and dear!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
This is how I feel to answer that!.!.
Sweet gentle breeze touching my heart
as foggy as winter with feelings of love
Fragrance of flowers never ever lasts
Misty looking cottons on the grass!.!.
Deep velvet night as sunset had passed,
Beauty of nature suddenly was dispatched,
But still the brilliant moon and twinkling of stars
Light up the night with a glow of love!.!.
It is quite simple, But this is how I truly feel in my heart eversince and this is how I really live in my very own heart!.
No matter how darkness may seem to cover up one's moment in anyone's life, There will be always light at the end!. It's just because its also nature!. Be always true to the heart and never feel overcomed by doubts anymore!. To cherish and hold the love that you already know was true and right there before you!.!.Then never to get deceived by fancy illusions anymore!.!.!.
Good Luck dearest!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
So sweet and dear
Keep smiling at life
For, to be forgiven
Is not your decision
Blame can only
Serve to a point
Evolution will force
The hand to submission
It is a chosen reality
A visual duality
The usual two sides
To every story, as they say
The preservation of an argument
Simply a want
for dis-engagement
A mathematical equation
The multiplicity to division
The division into subtraction
The subtraction into elimination
The path to connection
The connection
To an elongation
A smile
:)
My attention, you implored
Dear Stranger, you have it
If I may say, in my amateur way
Your are a fine poet
Of which I'd like to hear
More-so of!.
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Thats pretty deep!.
But i liked it :)
If you wrote this, then your extremally talented
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You write better when inspired with love, live long and well, and loved be!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
very good!.:)Www@QuestionHome@Com