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NON-EUCLIDEAN GEOMETRY The numbers should always align, Cubical; or in the manner of any of the four other Platonic solids, These ideas must be stackable, Geodesic; domestic and durable as dried grain, deliberate indifference, They cannot tell untruths, Query; plausible possibilities, dramas played out, plastic canvas!. ***** Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I can't understand why a person will take a year to write a novel when he can easily buy one for a few dollars!. Just kidding!. Maybe!.!.!.!.!. kidding!.!.!.!.!.!.!. I think!.Www@QuestionHome@Com This is a clever device often used by ad-men on bill-boards!. Sometimes the look of a slogan is as important it's sound!. I like your poem but I would prefer to see it hand written!. I'm sorry to say all I'm getting here is heavy alliteration!. A visual device needs a visual medium!. Try painting poetry instead of writing it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com In a world of straight lines yours are crooked, in a world that's round you leave me dumbfounded, as sun sets and night arrives you hold a flashlight against the road while I am blinded by bat vision!. I see the words!.!.!. I know they are well written!.!.!. but I am not sure where they take me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Metaphorical mathematics!. Some of the imagery stuns: "deliberate indifference" and "plastic canvas!." Www@QuestionHome@Com The chef should probably stick to cooking, poetry is the art of painting a picture with words, not paint, and this one painted a masterpiece!. Www@QuestionHome@Com Whilst behind you Picasso's prawns dance quirky quintessentially quaint quadrillesWww@QuestionHome@Com You are on fire today!Www@QuestionHome@Com |