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CRACKED POT The tinker called to mend a pot a pot from long ago was wrought was wrought by hands carefully taught carefully taught to bend when hot when hot, the pot, with solder sealed with solder sealed, now cook the meal the meal that means you can not feel not feel your time upon the wheel Upon the wheel we place a name a name called out with fear and shame and shame that comes with me to blame to blame for what the pot became ***** Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: OSU (Oklahoma State University) Something TD's dad and I have in common :) This is a fun and bouncy poem and I'm glad you are having fun with the form!. I'm having fun reading them!. However, I think that all your serious works in your style sound finished and refined!. This is very melodic and a joy to read aloud!. I can't wait to read it to my family!.Www@QuestionHome@Com OSU--Buckeyes!? Boy that piece certainly is bouncy!. I haven't even got to the meaning yet, I'm having too much fun just saying it at the moment!. Edit: Thanks!. I'm always afraid to interpret things that way--that stuff makes me paranoid I guess!. I know OSU was for Oklahoma State University!. I'm not a Buckeye backer by the way; I'm just from Ohio!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Tinkering with solder to mend a pot!. A pot that's cracked!. Metaphors ring through this piece!. Very well done!. As to its meaning!.!.!.Dr Feelgood ran out of the special medicinal plant that he brewed in his pot!. That is my stab, I go now to stab others! lolWww@QuestionHome@Com I think you stole my pot and reshaped it to make me think it wasn't mine!.!.!. but the aroma coming from it's opening could not be mistaken; it was the odor of my dna!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Very musical, with internal as well as end rhyme!. Not at all funerial!.Www@QuestionHome@Com This has your sense of style and humor all over it! Www@QuestionHome@Com |