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Question: How does it look like to you my first poem in English!?
Every sky's a brand new sky,
Uncanny once again
And every kiss, a brand new kiss,
New won, no matter when!.

And every love, a brand new love,
New cherished every day
Though lips and heart may slowly age,
The awe-struck boy will stay!.

And I will vow again to love
You each day of my life,
As though each morning were the first
We rose as man and wife!.

Just as a meadow washed by rain
Is relit by the dawn,
Just so our love, as we grow old,
Will each day be reborn!.

P!.D: I'm 14 years old, born in Venezuela!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Amazing!
Maybe you have already read some of the other entries under poetry!.
So don't be surprised to hear that this is really good!
A lot more thought and much deeper than most others!. This is no imitation, such as the other poems merely using 'deep' sounding words with a slight measure of rhythm!.
But a very good piece of art!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

entiendo: que es tu primer poema en ingles!.!.!. bueno pero como todos los que escribes me imagino que es muy hermoso!.!.!. me lo traducirias!?!?!?

saluditos!.!.!. =DWww@QuestionHome@Com

Hi,!
The poem is good!!!

salu2!!!=) XD xPWww@QuestionHome@Com

this is really good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com