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Question: My Poem For My GirlFriend!?
I just E-Mailed her this!

Rate it on 1-10!?


slowly drift off to sleep,I can only see you in my mind,Your in a garden with lots of beatiful roses,But your the prittyest thing I can see,as I approach you,you stand still as a rock, as if time has stoped In its tracks,looking at me with those glowing eyes,as I slowly touch your face with my hand, our lips tuch,as you put on a smile,I feel warm inside, knowing once,I finally made you smile!.A smile is worth 1,000 tears,if the smile comes from the heartWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Run it through something with spell check, my lad!.

If you're 9-13 I give it a seven!.

If you're 14-18 I give it a one or a two!.

If you're 18+ I'd stay off the wacky tobaccy and throw away your spleefs before gettin' mystical with the English language!.Www@QuestionHome@Com