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The first one i posted today seemed do get alot of feedback, so decided to post one more, sorry for flooding the Poetry section ^!.^

Think About it


Just imagine,

losing everything you have,

everyone you love!.

Not being able to feel,

the embrace of the person you adore!.

Not being able to argue with the mother,

that over protects,

through thick and thin!.

Your father,

that loves you,

yet acts like you`re never good enough,

acts like he hates you!.

All these occurrences never to happen again,

as much as you think,

that it`s good,

it`s the farthest thing from it,

you will miss it!.

This thought hated,

as may be!.

Most truthful,

as may be!.

Imagine losing everything around you,

your best friend,

that you would die for,

dies for you!.

What will you do!?

Live a life of luxury,

yet loneliness,

you shall be alone,

living in your own concoction!.

Imagine losing everything around you,

imagine losing your most loved one,

imagine losing me!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
That was sweet!.!. aww!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

srry its too long but im guessing it was a sweet poem since the first who comment it said so! but thx for the points!Www@QuestionHome@Com

sounds a lot like my life!. ha-ha!.Www@QuestionHome@Com