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Question: What will you think if the moon melted!?
Luna Melts
by C!.S!. Scotkin

Sullen, sultry night,
full moon dissolves into clouds!.
Blurred by vision of starlessness,
Luna melts!.
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Ms Scotkin,

What have you got against the moon!? I love the sarcasm of death, but I have a problem with the connotation!. If the moon is in it's most visible state and dissolving into the clouds, then how can it also melt!? You do not explain such phenomena of the entity melting by what means!? Is there a reason why it's existence is terminated by overheated sorrow!? I wonder aloud!.!.!. Grade B+Www@QuestionHome@Com

A truely sad time when the moon fades away
I find beauty in the night
It covers up what's ugly

I lovely poem summed up everything in very few lines

I envy anyone that can do that


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You are my Muse CS! (if ever I have one, it's you)

La Luna Negra
Shadows pass before fullness
Briefly snuffs out hope

Hope springs eternal
Shines again in tidal tune
Night-time torch song plays
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For some reason I love the short poems that have few words but say so much, your poetry displayed fits the bill and did I say how much I did enjoy this read, oh and so well penned to boot! Thanks for sharing!
Cheers!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think it evokes an absolutely beautiful, haunting, and somewhat sad, image/emotion

*lovely poem by the way*Www@QuestionHome@Com

You have reminded me that it has been a while since I watched luna melt!.
I better do it soon before summer melts away too!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

A dark ominous night
Sticks to my skin
It is too long
til mornin light!.
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I much prefer tuna melts!.!.!.but your poem is very nice;-)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Dang!.!.!.!.!.!.!.it WAS made outta cheese!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Indeed, it is a sight to behold!. Never quite the same!.

Lovely words!Www@QuestionHome@Com