Luna Melts
by C!.S!. Scotkin
Sullen, sultry night,
full moon dissolves into clouds!.
Blurred by vision of starlessness,
Luna melts!.
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by C!.S!. Scotkin Sullen, sultry night, full moon dissolves into clouds!. Blurred by vision of starlessness, Luna melts!. Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Ms Scotkin, What have you got against the moon!? I love the sarcasm of death, but I have a problem with the connotation!. If the moon is in it's most visible state and dissolving into the clouds, then how can it also melt!? You do not explain such phenomena of the entity melting by what means!? Is there a reason why it's existence is terminated by overheated sorrow!? I wonder aloud!.!.!. Grade B+Www@QuestionHome@Com A truely sad time when the moon fades away I find beauty in the night It covers up what's ugly I lovely poem summed up everything in very few lines I envy anyone that can do that I have a poem up, would love to hear from youWww@QuestionHome@Com You are my Muse CS! (if ever I have one, it's you) La Luna Negra Shadows pass before fullness Briefly snuffs out hope Hope springs eternal Shines again in tidal tune Night-time torch song plays Www@QuestionHome@Com For some reason I love the short poems that have few words but say so much, your poetry displayed fits the bill and did I say how much I did enjoy this read, oh and so well penned to boot! Thanks for sharing! Cheers!Www@QuestionHome@Com I think it evokes an absolutely beautiful, haunting, and somewhat sad, image/emotion *lovely poem by the way*Www@QuestionHome@Com You have reminded me that it has been a while since I watched luna melt!. I better do it soon before summer melts away too!.Www@QuestionHome@Com A dark ominous night Sticks to my skin It is too long til mornin light!. Www@QuestionHome@Com I much prefer tuna melts!.!.!.but your poem is very nice;-)Www@QuestionHome@Com Dang!.!.!.!.!.!.!.it WAS made outta cheese!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Indeed, it is a sight to behold!. Never quite the same!. Lovely words!Www@QuestionHome@Com |