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Question: I wrote this poem and I was wondering what people think!?
Black skies will burn
Chaos takes control
Consumed by hatred
Anger takes its hold
Fiery Ashes fall from a red dawn sky
Walking through the debris
This is the end of the line
Men will cry
Pestilence fills the air
Men will cry,
Hearts filled with despair
Nations lapse
Leaders fall in turn
Watch the cities crumble
As the black skies burn



This is my first poem!. It is called Black Skies Will Burn!. And no Im not emo!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Wow I really like this poem my only suggestion is that you take out one of the men will cry lines and make up another!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

sounds scary but its cool

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I like your writing style, writing poetry myself I can relate to it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

excellent!. i like it a lot, the imagery is exceptional!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Pretty dark man, pretty dark!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

supposed to be the tribulation period or the end of the world!?!?
VeRy GoOd!! I luv luv luv it!! ;)Www@QuestionHome@Com

pretty good(:Www@QuestionHome@Com