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Position:Home>Poetry> Do you like my poem "Poor Man's Tale"? Do you have any other titleQuestion: Do you like my poem "Poor Man's Tale"!? Do you have any other title suggestions!? I walked along, retraced my steps, years back an infant I was,
to see myself, so young and small, as a baby just because!. On a hill, forgotten, without loving care, left alone with this dark, sad world to bare!. With tear stained eyes, mud on my skin, a starving baby, so fragile and thin!. I let out sobs and cries of pain, abandoned by parents filled with shame!. A wet tear drop leaked from my eye, just as the tears, as an infant, I had cried!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Maybe it's just a metaphor I'm not understanding but how does that name "Poor Man's Tale" tie in with your poem!. Anyways if I were you I'd call this poem "The Infant" or maybe "The Tears of My Past"!. Www@QuestionHome@Com I like it!. How about these titles: Crying Infant Who I used to be Mans Tears Mans Teary Past Crying Baby Tale The Man Who Cried Www@QuestionHome@Com Fabuloso Poema!. I like it, it's very nice!. I was wondering was it a true story!. Www@QuestionHome@Com i like it i would name it the Lonely OneWww@QuestionHome@Com |