Poems: edited haiku, do you like?

Question: Poems: edited haiku, do you like!?

I wrote these haiku`s looking at this picture!.

http://media!.photobucket!.com/image/black!.!.!.

Which one sounds best!?

Exhausted bright star
Entranced I'm drawn into your
Mystical black spell!.

Baby blues passed on
You're in heaven now afloat
Death the beginning

?8/14/08

Prying blue devils
Soar swiftly by heavens gate
Aiding Psychics lies
?8/17/08

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

The first achieves more poetically by trying less hard, so I will pick that!. Sometimes, we thwart ourselves by trying too hard!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think the first two are the strongest!.!.!.the pictures in the link you provided are stunning!. You captured the nova feeling really well with your second!. Good work, good amerikus!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I kind of like the third one the best!. The other ones just seem more like a mess of words rather than poetry!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i like them all! especially the 2nd one!. :(Www@QuestionHome@Com

You are very good!Www@QuestionHome@Com

i'm still a big fan of the first!. :) that one's got my vote!.Www@QuestionHome@Com