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Question: Can this be taken as a poem!?
I have watch you walk on the beaches of my soul
saw our sandcastles washed away by the waves of life
Your boat carried away by our storms
have become a seagull's cry in the wind
I have lost my compass
you my guiding star!.
I have watched you walk away on the beaches of my soul
hopelessly trying to anchor you to my heart
but its to late
the sandcastles is wiped away!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Yes!. It's lyrical, flowing, with great word choice and imagery!.
It's great how you manage to weave similes and metaphors so smoothly into the short but meaningful words!.
Keep up the great work! =]Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yep! I really like it =) especially the "hopelessly trying to anchor you to my heart" line =)Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow, very nice!!

I love the imageryWww@QuestionHome@Com

anything can be "taken as a poem"!.!. if you use correct verb tensesWww@QuestionHome@Com

Oh yes! and its fabulous!.!.!.!.i loved it
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