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Question: Anyone who has any skill with poetry help I need it!?
my husband and i are sending out balloon to announce outr babies gender but we need a short explanation on it in poem form is this ok do you have any better way of writing it please help
Ten little fingers
Ten little toes
boy or girl !?
blow up the balloon
soon you will knowWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
this is not a water balloon
but the water will break real soon

this is a little announcement
to tell of the he or she pronouncement

so pucker up and blow
and you will soon know

our most cherished secret is here
in this one little sphereWww@QuestionHome@Com

Five and Five funny fingers,
With Ten toes, no less-
But, a boy, or a Girl!?
Curious!? I'll confess-
Blow up the balloon,
And you'll find out soon!.



I'm not sure if that's good, so feel free to edit freely!.
Lolz!.


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I liked where you were going with this, and here's my idea for it:

Ten little fingers
And ten little toes
A bundle of joy-
But a girl or a boy!?
Blow up the balloon
You'll have your answer soon!.Www@QuestionHome@Com