What do you think in this poem?

Question: What do you think in this poem!?

baby you capture me in your eyes
in place where i belong
in beautiful place where your love is all i need
you just capture me in your eyes
when i see you look at me and smile i know you are the one for me
you capture me with your smile
you are the only one i ever wanted in my life
causes baby you always make me smile
you capture me with your smile
you capture me in your eyes
you capture me !.!.!.!.!.you capture meWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I like it!.
Sounds like the lyrics to a song :)
No, but I really like it!.
If its yours well done ;)Www@QuestionHome@Com

This seems more of a song than a poem!. Consider adding ''baby'' at the beginning of each sentance to make it seem more of a poem in your case!. Forget the last sentance when you repeat ''you capture me'' as it sounds silly and more of a love song!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

As a lot of poetry does!.!.!. they really sound like they could be great song lyrics!!
They've got a lotta ryhthm!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Thats great! keep it up!. I agree i think it seems like a lyrical poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com