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Question: Is it true, you are what you Yeats!?
In the style of WB Yeats (ABABCDCD)
as per "he wishes for the cloths of heaven"

Come sit beside me on pillowed clouds
As I direct the firmament to move
Observe beyond the darker clouds
Wind of change allowed to slower move
Behold in day and night piercing light
Darkness had never revealed before
My Word begat pure blazing light
Beginning that was planned before
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
True tis' true Was there suppose to be a tunnel for the bright light I see here!?!?

The antithesis of my mid-summer nights scream!!
TY!.!.!. J tt Z


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If this is true you just served one filling breakfast to me, filled with Vit!. Imagery! This is incredibly beautiful!.!.!.Brava, Madam!Www@QuestionHome@Com

You certainly look a lot younger and prettier than him, but sound a lot like him!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.hmm!. Reincarnation coming!? Nah, a sideways jaunt, but nicely done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You have become a director of the poetic firmament!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Jellz, Bravo!
You are full of surprises with words, travel many roads!.
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