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Question: POEM:Can you guess what this haiku is about!?
Exhausted bright star
Entranced I'm drawn into your
Mystical black spell!.

?8/14/08

Best answer gets 10 Pt's or more!.(If you get thumbs up)

Is it a good haiku!?
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
it's a really good haiku!. :) and i'm going with 'black hole!.'

i like that your words are capable of at least dual meanings!. could be scifaiku, on a celestial level, or could be human interpersonal, someone drawn to a damaged someone else, or could mean another thing altogether!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

I'm going to wager that you're writing about a black hole and its tremendous gravitational pull!. It's a good haiku, perhaps inflated in the second line, a little emotionally imprecise!. Still, enjoyable to read!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow! This poem is really good!. I like it!.
OK I'm gonna take a stab and say it's about a person who has like an energetic personality yet is worn out all the time!? I really don't have any idea!. Sorry if it's completely wrong!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

I will say it's a star gone nova after burning out!. (possibly producing a black hole)

I don't know enough about haiku to critique one!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Is it a Black Hole in space!? Sci-faiku!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I really liked this!!! 11/10!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

An Eclipse!?
Cheers!Www@QuestionHome@Com