Exhausted bright star
Entranced I'm drawn into your
Mystical black spell!.
?8/14/08
Best answer gets 10 Pt's or more!.(If you get thumbs up)
Is it a good haiku!?
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Entranced I'm drawn into your Mystical black spell!. ?8/14/08 Best answer gets 10 Pt's or more!.(If you get thumbs up) Is it a good haiku!? Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: it's a really good haiku!. :) and i'm going with 'black hole!.' i like that your words are capable of at least dual meanings!. could be scifaiku, on a celestial level, or could be human interpersonal, someone drawn to a damaged someone else, or could mean another thing altogether!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com I'm going to wager that you're writing about a black hole and its tremendous gravitational pull!. It's a good haiku, perhaps inflated in the second line, a little emotionally imprecise!. Still, enjoyable to read!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Wow! This poem is really good!. I like it!. OK I'm gonna take a stab and say it's about a person who has like an energetic personality yet is worn out all the time!? I really don't have any idea!. Sorry if it's completely wrong!. Www@QuestionHome@Com I will say it's a star gone nova after burning out!. (possibly producing a black hole) I don't know enough about haiku to critique one!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Is it a Black Hole in space!? Sci-faiku!Www@QuestionHome@Com I really liked this!!! 11/10!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com An Eclipse!? Cheers!Www@QuestionHome@Com |