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Question: Do you like breezy, lazy days and is this a Partenza Represa!?
A gentle breeze whips by
by weather now flag is worn
worn silver dollar leaves
leaves sight of the aspen dance
dance of careless discarded litter
litter slowly skips along
along it's roadside journey
journey now free and unfettered
unfettered rusted windmill blades
blades blown that creak and groan
groan their way full circle
circle round so lazily
lazily the dog lies still
still comfortably oblivious
oblivious on the porch asleep
asleep no sign of movement
movement now a twitch of his ear
ear bothered by troublesome fly
fly away and begone while he dreams
dreams of a breezy summer day!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
oh, wow,,, oh, wow!.
Now THAT is impressive!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Almost, but not quite because each line must contain an 8 syllable count!. Here are the criteria: http://www!.poemhunter!.com/poem/flight-of!.!.!.
However, that does not take away from the fact that this is a very lovely poem and a joy to read!.
*uh!.!.!.wha!.!.!.what'd I say!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
That was so serene Ma its like i have been there!. Dreams of a breezy summer day!.No its real something that could happen anywhere!. Whether sittin on the front porch or on the back of a tailgate of a truck!. Thanks!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Wow !.!.!. for a second I thought I
was having visual hiccups
Very connective & systemic
The stuff of String Theory
This is my 1st time seeing that format!.
I might experiment with it!.
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awwwww, so peaceful!. Thank you for that beautiful journey!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Excellent! Thanks for sharing your thoughts!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
That was awesome once again girl!. Loved it!. LOLWww@QuestionHome@Com
I could picture it all!.!.!.Love honeyWww@QuestionHome@Com
aren't poems supposed to rhyme!?
im kidding Ma, if i could write one i would do it about my dadWww@QuestionHome@Com
What a beautiful picture you painted!.!.!.thank youWww@QuestionHome@Com