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Question: Have you woken up and seen things differently!?
Oooooooooh yeah, that crooked
shine, halfway up the blade of grass
dew-drop avalanche
passing spider flinches
robin's head half-red jabs the web
tired dog gazes, his wolf dreams
dormant and morning
sweeps clean the groggy
and dazed indifference
of night!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
so, that's a good thing, right!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Every day is a new beginning!.
The day starts with a little light,
the birds come out and sing their songs!.
The dew on the grass is fresh and new,
the bumble bees start eating their nectar!.
The kitty stretches out the kinks of the night,
Goes hunting for it's morning meal!.
And I, yes I look around at the wonder of it all!.
LOL
Very nice dear boy!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Buk, when I read stuff like this from you, I just want to whack my head for my lack of depth!.!.!.how I wish I could express this way! You have a poet's eye, a gift given you, that so few have!. Take that eye with your heart and mind!.!.!.!.poof! A combination that takes my breath away, literally, as I read such as this!.

It's a good thing I love you, or I'd really hate you for your brilliance!

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now if one could only shut up the re- construction next door every crack of dawn,I believe that poem will convince me to appreciate mornings!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

"!.!.the groggy/and dazed indifference/of night--excellent poetic expression!.

Does this poem have a title!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Ya, especially when I've gone to sleep petting my big orange and white cat and wake up with his Butt in my face instead!. I certainly see things differently then!. And he doesn't clean his butt!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's like 2 people growing up in the same house and having totally different memories!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I see it too, except no dog!. Instead I see 3 lazy male cats and my fierce, killing machine, she goes by the name "Gracie" !.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes sir, and the images you stir with this are not just images, but memories!.
I can smell the dew!.
Thanks Buk!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

"dew-drop avalanche!.!.!.!."

!.!.!.!.love it!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I wake up on the back porch often out here,and your poem is right on,man I miss my old dog now!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yeah, I think I smoked a little of that back in the old days!. Far Out, dude!. peaceWww@QuestionHome@Com

Bravo!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Good Morning to you too sunshine!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Seems like they are beginning to now!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You had me at crooked shine!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

YES WEN AM NOT PIST
QUALITY OVERSIGHTWww@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, the last time I slept out side, 'cept my eye's were glazed from doggy breath breathing in my face!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Oh, I love your poems!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Grr nothing changes for me!.!.!.!.!.!.!.same four walls, sunlight glimpsing through the curtains, hurting my eyes, oh wait, i've missed something, Hello who are you!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.xWww@QuestionHome@Com

It's okWww@QuestionHome@Com

Yep, I do that most of the time!. It is a habit;-)Www@QuestionHome@Com