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Question: How do you find this poem!? Thoughts and feelings!?
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She bends metal with her mind
Calls it art
I call it a cage
He bent metal in with his heart
Called it a foundation
I called it a boost
He’s my hero
Shoved me from the cage
A life for a life
To squeeze through the bar
I left something behind
In the cage
To large to loose
So there he sits
In the cage
With my anger
I’m still not mad, just crippled

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
i'm not so sure
its kind of confusing and not very straight
when you write a poem, dont use "I" and "She" or "He" together!. like dont say something about what she or he did then comment on how you think about it!. it confuses the reader and doenst make a great poemWww@QuestionHome@Com