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Question: Does love frighten you!?
"Snarl Ball Lion Cub"

Calm down,
I won't hurt you!.
Touch my hand!.
See!?
No poison!.

Can you scent
fearlessness!?

I know
the predator
lies in you,
avenging lioness,
hunter,
protectress!.

Are you
protecting me
or yourself!?

Sharp pain,
needle teeth
sink in my skin!.

Ah,
there you are,
not hiding anymore!.
Is my blood sweet!?

Why is there
fear
in your eyes!?

Did you actually think
I would run!?Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Sounds very heroic and brave - ready for what may happen - and welcoming it!. A VERY positive attitude ?Www@QuestionHome@Com

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Wow,thats a very interesting and unique poem!. I like it!. Its very creative with also a deeper meaning behind it all!. For me,its sayin u can love someone so much that even if hey hurt you,you wont run away!. Love overcomes fear and pain!.
Great job,i love it!=]

Poetry=?Www@QuestionHome@Com

It sounds like your talking about a vampire!.

Love to me, is like this poem!. Yes, I fear it!. The heart is delicate and if you give it to a beast, they`ll shed it to pieces with no remorse!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is tough stuff ET!.!.!.!.Do I comment on the words!.!.!.or lament over the question!?!?!?!? Damn the question !!Www@QuestionHome@Com