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Phone Call – A Trigee
by C!.S!. Scotkin

Phone rings………!.your voice
I answer…!.………!.!.rejoice!
Ears hear…………!.!.your heart
your heart………!.!.!.hears mine!


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Excellent Trigee! This one seems particularly well suited to the form, and is a masterpiece of minimalism!.!.!.less is more!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Excellent, I know the joy of such phone calls, when I can hear the heart beating in tandem with mine, and the voice thrumming beneath it!. Thanks!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I agree with Plat, though; I do, finally, get what a trigee is meant to be!.
Should I switch that first comma and the semicolon!?
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It's a virus! Could you do a Trigeeotemy!?

Seriously, it's great!. Seems someone very important called!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Excellent, elegant, wonderful!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I have no idea what a Trigee is!. But I am blown away that I like this!.

This is a successful thing!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very sweet Trigee!. Lovely write!. So many Trigees!.!.!.It's Trigee-mania Www@QuestionHome@Com

Now do the triple (quad)! Enough playing around! Oh, by the way, very nice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Nice
Like the Trigee!!


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i like this very much!.!.!.you have put in 15 words an awful lot of emotion!.!.!.great stuff!.Www@QuestionHome@Com