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Position:Home>Poetry> Do you like this new Trigee?Question: Do you like this new Trigee!? Phone Call – A Trigee by C!.S!. Scotkin Phone rings………!.your voice I answer…!.………!.!.rejoice! Ears hear…………!.!.your heart your heart………!.!.!.hears mine! Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Excellent Trigee! This one seems particularly well suited to the form, and is a masterpiece of minimalism!.!.!.less is more!Www@QuestionHome@Com Excellent, I know the joy of such phone calls, when I can hear the heart beating in tandem with mine, and the voice thrumming beneath it!. Thanks!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I agree with Plat, though; I do, finally, get what a trigee is meant to be!. Should I switch that first comma and the semicolon!? Www@QuestionHome@Com It's a virus! Could you do a Trigeeotemy!? Seriously, it's great!. Seems someone very important called!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Excellent, elegant, wonderful!Www@QuestionHome@Com I have no idea what a Trigee is!. But I am blown away that I like this!. This is a successful thing!. Www@QuestionHome@Com Very sweet Trigee!. Lovely write!. So many Trigees!.!.!.It's Trigee-mania Www@QuestionHome@Com Now do the triple (quad)! Enough playing around! Oh, by the way, very nice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Nice Like the Trigee!! - ? Taylor ?Www@QuestionHome@Com i like this very much!.!.!.you have put in 15 words an awful lot of emotion!.!.!.great stuff!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |