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Question: Do you keep careful records!?
"What I've Given, What I've Gained" - acrostic nonet & unlucky
Sweet cinnamon stains air around me,
alone tonight with just your voice
captivating me with song,
ripping my heart in two!.
I feel you near me;
feeling's a lie!.
I know you
craft, your
edge!.
Find
only me
reaching out to you!.
Life has betrayed us both and
opened doors that we can never close!.
Vengeance, dear, can be exorcised in romance!.
Even now I am alone with you, vindicated!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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