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Question: "Keepsake Vows" A poem for comment, who, what,why,when!?
Beneath the stars
and glistening moon
through shadow clouds
I dreamed of you,

and by gone days
of sacred vows
exchanged by candle light!.
we knew not then,
of strife and error
between two, brought on
by self, or life's
external humanness,
of survival difficulties
and growing change
of personalites, not vows!.


For better or worse
through out detours
we traveled miles
in length of years,
with keepsake vows
love and loyalty,
for all that wasn't
for all that was
we thanked
our lucky stars above,
for keepsake vows!.




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There is no I might in I do!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

A lovely look at life and vows, the vows of life!. I like the first and last stanzas!. Stanza 2's last five lines to me did not flow as well!. Overall, very nice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

A beautiful view of marriage and connection!. Thank you for this window into the soul, into an event and time not yet experienced!. Now I grow ever more impatient!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Truly, I vow you did well!.Www@QuestionHome@Com