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Question: And what type of medication would you advise!?
Medicate Me
Infatuation
Yes, please, medicate me
give me a new reality
to see things differently!.
A single kiss will do!.
Yes, I do
We are gathered here
to roll the dice on this union,
what say thee…perhaps a raffle!?
Against the odds…will they!?
No You Don’t
I gave my all to you
and this is how you treat me now!?
To think you got me with that kiss!
Pucker now…lawyer’s here!
Depression
Please medicate me now,
give me a new reality
to see things differently!.
A Valium will do!
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
BAM!! Fireworks!. I am loving this day!. I have read some killer stuff!.
I love clever well written pieces and this my good man in one of the good ones!. I often pick up books of poetry and turn to one page and read the poem!. If that one poem hits me I will buy the book!. (For some background I picked up one by Blake and turned right to Poison Tree, it was fate)!. I would buy this book!.
You have a story, a flow, I know you from this!. Crazy!. Can you feel the enthusiasm coming from me!. Www@QuestionHome@Com
I shun anti-depressants, for I do not believe in depression!. As I have counseled people before, "don't get depressed, get angry!" At least you can do something positive with angry energy!. Depression just sucks it out of you and everyone else around you!.
But enough about me, this is a beautiful, slightly funny, slightly tragic poem!. I enjoy the juxtaposition!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I got two things to say:
1) Hugs, not drugs (hugs is meant to be metaphorical, unless you can get the real thing), and
2) They should make you obtain a lawyer to get married, not the other way around, and
3) That was a good out loud read, absolutely, positively, and most definitely!. Www@QuestionHome@Com
The value of a kiss is lost,
in this now age, there are
no bases, they shoot for
home, without leases, and
if they choose to say,"I do"
in back of mind, they think
divorce is a way out!. Not
thinking of how ugly it may get!.
inside and out!.
Kudos to your infatuation!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
You can stick a needle in your arm
And wind up in the funny farm!.
You can scarf a quart of beer, dear heart
And you will only belch and fart!.
You can take a toke of Mary Jane
But you will still be feeling pain!.
So if your looking for some bliss
Take the kiss, take the kiss!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Well you've gone and written it haven't you!?!.!.!. my autobiography!.!.!. except I needed morphine and hospitalization at the end!. I guess I must have been in love as well!.
nice imagery, I was depressed reading it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
The sun will come out to-morrow, bet your bottom dollar!.You are doing the "write" thing!.Purge, purge, purge!.Get rid of it all!.The best revenge is to do well!.Be happy and get on with your life!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
When the divorce is over call me!.
I'll medicate you!.
555-5555
lol (ok just kidding)
P!.S!. I love the poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I like the allusion to gambling when it comes to marriage!.!.!.so true for so many!. I very much enjoyed this poem despite it's darker theme!. Very creative form!. Well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Whoa! What an excruciating painful poem!. I have a plethora of modern medicine!. Feel free to pick and choose!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
$100!.00 and a night on the town with the girls!. No drugs!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Neon, your glow never ceases!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Lexapro got me through my last divorce!.!.!.
he got a little money, I got a lot of sanity!.!.!.not a bad trade, all in all!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Short honeymoon!?
Nay, nay!.!.!.don't take drugs!
They turn us into slugs!Www@QuestionHome@Com