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Question: Would you like read my poem!? and comment!?
I'm 14 and this is a very short poem:

Sky

Beautiful sky
Oh, so high
I'll go there when i die
But before, i'll say goodbye!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Short but beautiful poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Ah, the presumption of youth!

Definitely going up then!? Good for you, wish I was as confident!.

Keep writing poetry and you may increase your chances!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hi

It Is Quite A Good Poem But To Improve You Could Make It A Bit Longer And Possibly You Could Then Do A Sequel About The Sun And Ground!.

But Overall It Was Very Good!!!!

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good poem; line 2 especiallyWww@QuestionHome@Com

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