I'm 14 and this is a very short poem:
Sky
Beautiful sky
Oh, so high
I'll go there when i die
But before, i'll say goodbye!.
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Sky Beautiful sky Oh, so high I'll go there when i die But before, i'll say goodbye!. Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Short but beautiful poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Ah, the presumption of youth! Definitely going up then!? Good for you, wish I was as confident!. Keep writing poetry and you may increase your chances!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Hi It Is Quite A Good Poem But To Improve You Could Make It A Bit Longer And Possibly You Could Then Do A Sequel About The Sun And Ground!. But Overall It Was Very Good!!!! Www@QuestionHome@Com good poem; line 2 especiallyWww@QuestionHome@Com urgWww@QuestionHome@Com |