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Question: What should be the title of this poem!.!?
I'm not to worried if people dont like it, because i was upset and just needed to express myself!. But if you do like it let me know!. also What would be a good title for it!.!?

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On the way there i tryed to sing to him
but all i could choke up was a few words
i wanted to make him feel better
to comfort him
i new what was coming
i was scared
not only for him but for us to!.

i wish i could take it all away
but i cant it doesnt really matter now
its done
its over
it cant be taken back

we got there it felt rushed
tears flowing from our faces
he had no clue
he had no idea
but we all knew

we asked one last time
if there was anything to be done
he said no
he gave us 4 minutes

he looked at us with his big green eyes
not knowing what was to come
as he went numb

we sat on the floor til he was no more
filling our heads was betrail
filling our hearts was regret

my mother was frantic
they told us it was for the better
but how can anyone be so sure
second guessing what comes next
i started to panic

we all cryed
on the way home
as i tried to comfort my sister
tears rolled down my face
i tryed so hard
to be strong for her

as we drove
we looked aboved
to see a cloud
she told us
it looked like heavens gates
like heavens doors were open

She started to cry
as she realized it was over
he wasnt coming back
he wasnt going to be there
when she got home

the emptiness was felt
all through the car
my head was killing me
the crying started again
from the front seat

remembering the cloud
i choked up the words
he was showing you
he made it
& hes safe!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Dyslexic dystopia!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

HeartbreakWww@QuestionHome@Com

"Forever Numb" Www@QuestionHome@Com

that poem is so sad but I like it!.!.!.


I think it should be called "Dealing with Grief" or "Heaven"Www@QuestionHome@Com