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Question: Did my friend really write this poem!? Or did she copy it!?
No, she will not get rid of her frown
A heart's only two teardrops upside-down
Each one of those tears was shed for you
After her heart was broken in two
So will you fix her heart!? Let her live her dream!?
Or will you leave this mess for someone else to clean!?
I bet you don't even know that you caused her such pain
So many tears shed, her pillow is stained
She thought you would love her, she could see it in your eyes
But you turned out to be another jerk in disguise

She has it on her YouTube page and says it's all hers!. But she's been known to do copy a few poems/lyrics here and there and I don't think she actually has this poetry genuis in her!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
The Pain that You Caused
Created by luvin-u

I'm not really a big poem writer!.!.!.but I think I might start writing more!. I was kinda surprised when I wrote this, it's depressing, and none of this actually happened to me or anyone I know!.!.!. Well, anyway, I hope it doesn't totally suck!. Enjoy!.
Tagged: poem, death, pain, caused
Created by luvin-u on Wednesday, July 09, 2008
Please read the memo!




No, she will not get rid of her frown

A heart's only two teardrops upside-down


Each one of those tears was shed for you

After her heart was broken in two


So will you fix her heart!? Let her live her dream!?

Or will you leave this mess for someone else to clean!?


I bet you don't even know that you caused her such pain

So many tears shed, her pillow is stained


She thought you would love her, she could see it in your eyes

But you turned out to be another jerk in disguise


Down her cheek more tears started to cascade

She went to the bathroom and got a razorblade


As she watched blood pour out from her wrist

She thought of the life that she will have missed


She realized that death was not the right way

But when the ambulance arrived it was too late


Once such a great girl, but now she is gone

Do you now see that pain that you caused!?

*Note: This poem does NOT encourage suicide, and there is NEVER any reason to harm yourself! Please read my latest journal entry entitled "EVERYONE please read this" if you have ever harmed or considered harming yourself!.*
Did you like this poem!? Write one of your own!

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ha no she didnt i found it here ,,,
http://www!.quizilla!.com/poems/7485523/th!.!.!.

here
http://www!.poemhunter!.com/poem/the-pain-!.!.!.

its a famous poem i think by

Broken Nd Alone
(26th August 1989 / Taunton, Somerset)

So basically shes full of it lol ! If you ever have this problem again just google the lyrics and it takes you to the poem she mostlikely stole !.

Cheers ,
Izzie
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I found it on quizilla!.!.!.!.if she has an account there, it might still be hers!. I couldn't find it anywhere else!.
ps!. maybe it's not my place to say so, but you must not be incredible friends if you doubt her when she tells you something, and if you don't have enough faith in her to think she could ever create something beautiful like this!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

its very good

reminds me of some dickenson classics mixed with henry thorough !.!.!.

i would say you have a good chance of being published ,

submit to the 'writersguild!.com' for consideration ,

my girlfriend is a member longstanding and they publish new talent all the time

good luckWww@QuestionHome@Com

i am into poetry myself and there is a poem about the same stuff yes but this is a one of a kind so maybe she just changed the words and kept the idea but i doubt itWww@QuestionHome@Com

it looks too proffesional for your friend to be honest!.!.!. beautiful poem though OP! here it is--- http://www!.quizilla!.com/poems/7485523/th!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Try recommending Quizzila to her!. If she says she has an account, ask her her username and verify it!. I personally think she's lying, but you can check!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

http://www!.quizilla!.com/poems/7485523/th!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I found this serching the web it has all th same lines but more too
unless that account is hers i think she copyed and pasted it
http://www!.quizilla!.com/poems/7485523/th!.!.!.
here is the whole poem for you
No, she will not get rid of her frown

A heart's only two teardrops upside-down


Each one of those tears was shed for you

After her heart was broken in two


So will you fix her heart!? Let her live her dream!?

Or will you leave this mess for someone else to clean!?


I bet you don't even know that you caused her such pain

So many tears shed, her pillow is stained


She thought you would love her, she could see it in your eyes

But you turned out to be another jerk in disguise


Down her cheek more tears started to cascade

She went to the bathroom and got a razorblade


As she watched blood pour out from her wrist

She thought of the life that she will have missed


She realized that death was not the right way

But when the ambulance arrived it was too late


Once such a great girl, but now she is gone

Do you now see that pain that you caused!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

poor girl probably just wants some attention,
but yes it is off of the net :(
but i wouldnt say anything, if shes a friend dont
say anything just keep it to your self :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow nice poem, but I think I did see some things like So many tears shed her pillow is stained, and a heart's only two teardrops upside downWww@QuestionHome@Com

Copy IMO kids nowadays can't do such things!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I'm not sure if this is your friend or not, but I found it on line!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

thats for u to decide!.!.!.u kno her better!.!.!.
nice poem tho!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

it's from someone on quizilla!.com with the name luvin uWww@QuestionHome@Com