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Question: Does this poem need a room!?
"Melted Wax and Wine"

Limits freed,
only need
and devotion!.
Love flickers!.

In the dark,
black light spark!.
Whisper my name!.
Love flickers!.

Lipstick press,
we undress
in the darkness!.
Love flickers!.

Hearts quiver,
lovers shiver,
our sweet release!.!.!.
Love flames!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Your poetry is the perfect source for my trifecta!.!.!.
Pardon my interruption to your poem!.!.!. but you so inspired me that I made a Trigee out of it!.!.!. I pray it does not exceed community standards, but I know I may have pushed the limit!.


Limits freed!.!.!.Limits surpassed
only need!.!.!.your body pressed to mine
and devotion!.!.!.on my knees
Love flickers!.!.!.with butterfly kisses

In the dark!.!.!.I explore my senses
black light spark!.!.!.my eyes cover your skin
Whisper my name!.!.!.and I whisper erotically
Love flickers!.!.!. feeling the heat of your body

Lipstick press!.!.!. right through me
we undress!.!.!.I tear through your clothes
in the darkness!.!.!.my fingers exploring
Love flickers!.!.!.giving you pleasure

Hearts quiver!.!.!.as your legs quiver
lovers shiver!.!.!.we collapse on the floor
our sweet release!.!.!.to be one forever
Love flames!.!.!.burning brightly evermore!.


I loved your poem, can you tell by my answer!?

add: it's too late to get a room!.
and yes the meter (of my answer) wasn't exactly right but what
do you expect in 5-10-15 minutes of effort!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is a good poem!.
I like it I understand it!.

At first I was confused, but after I read it again it all made sense!.

Limits freed!?
No, I don't think it needs a room!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

what do you mean, need a room!?if you mean to say that its about sex, then yeah, you're right!. it definitely need a room!. =DWww@QuestionHome@Com

Oh desire, how sweet the love not to mention the nicely written poetry! Cheers!Www@QuestionHome@Com

The poem is lovely where it sits, but I need a cigarette!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

http://www!.omgwhatever!.com/farmer/theroo!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It doesn't need a room, but I might!.
Beautiful and sensual!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

No!.!.!.outside is fun too!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Its a good poem!!!
Hope I helped!

- ? Taylor ?Www@QuestionHome@Com

I'm too old for this, I need a cold showerWww@QuestionHome@Com

What Dondi said!. Well written, and sensuous!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com