Do you like it? any suggestions?!? helpp please?

Question: Do you like it!? any suggestions!?!!? helpp please!?

*No good comes from loving the one whose hurt you most
And I'd like to propose a toast
Here's to the one it will never work with
The one who made the girl I used to be a myth
Here's to the one who never showed he cared
From now on, my heart will not tear
I'd like to say that I've never given up on anyone
But maybe its fate I give up on just this one
Better yet, maybe its just his karmaWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

This is AWESOME!. You did a fantastic job!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I do like it, a lot!.
I'm just not crazy about the last line!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com