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Question: A short poem!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.
It’s the never ending sentence
That’s ends in why
It’s the way that your words
Fall into a lie
It’s the way you always
Pretend to care
It’s the way you sometimes
Stop and stare
It’s the way you leave
Out through my door
And the way you always leave
Me wanting more
It’s the way you love me
Then turn to hate
And the way you leave my heart strained
From much unwanted weight
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I like the way your portrayed a few common traits of love!. Firstly, love itself, then the feeling of betrayal/possession and lastly how your tied down possibly be marriage!. Good Poem :]Www@QuestionHome@Com

that's brilliant, the confliction of lurve!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

that is insanely awesome!
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i think it is short but u forgot how rich and deep and well written this poem really isWww@QuestionHome@Com

That's really good!. It resonates with everyone, because there is such a person in all our lives!. Good show!Www@QuestionHome@Com