Care to criticize my poem?

Question: Care to criticize my poem!?

He has got a taste for
blood!?
love!?
He has got her voice in his mind!.
She won't leave, she won't get out,
He can't figure!.!.!.
Whats this about!?
Sometimes he can taste her kiss
Sometimes he wants her
body!?
corpse!?
His mind is losing it!.
Her voice is
fading!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Sure I will criticize your poem!

Okay- I like the begining!.

He has got a taste for
blood!?
love!?
He has got her voice in his mind!.
She won't leave, she won't get out,
He can't figure!.!.!.
Whats this about!?

However, I dont really like

Sometimes he can taste her kiss
Sometimes he wants her
body!?
corpse!?

That does not make as much sence to me!.
Then the ending is alright!. But it dosent really flow as well as the rest of the poem!.

All around its a pretty good poem!. On a scale of 1-10 (10 being the best) I would give you a 7!.5!Www@QuestionHome@Com

its scary!. maybe if i was psycho i'd understand it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

wont' make sense 'till you get through the art of poem
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its dark,deep,but goodWww@QuestionHome@Com

eh, its okayWww@QuestionHome@Com