What do you think about my poem? Please critque!

Question: What do you think about my poem!? Please critque!

He has got a taste for
blood!?
love!?
He has got her voice in his mind!.
She won't leave, she won't get out,
He can't figure!.!.!.
Whats this about!?
Sometimes he can taste her kiss
Sometimes he wants her
body!?
corpse!?
His mind is losing it!.
Her voice is
fading!.!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Whaow,quite freaky but i like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love it!. You have tons of talent!. Great job!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

DEEP lolWww@QuestionHome@Com