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Position:Home>Poetry> A Poem I Just Wrote... Crime.Question: A Poem I Just Wrote!.!.!. Crime!. Committing a crime is never fun,
and that wasn't intended as a pun!. Crime is a serious thing, never ever take it in vain!. It fills your soul with greed and hate, and washes away all things great!. Ask forgiveness from whom you may, and never ever let this dismay!. How was it!? Did it make sense!?Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Nice! It was pretty good and it did make sence!Www@QuestionHome@Com It did but the second couplet you'd have to mispronounce thing as than for it to rhyme but you space the rhyme out like put a line in that doesn't rhyme until the next two lines down like this Committing a crime has never crossed my mind It may have to do with how I was raised But maybe it's because i'd never find the time But mostly it's because of what people would say kind of like that but great poem I personally don't like to space into stanzas and like four lines if i do but different people do different things and this works for youWww@QuestionHome@Com Childish!.Www@QuestionHome@Com looks like a 10 year old wrote that its not bad but its not good eitherWww@QuestionHome@Com |