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Question: Why are two lips important!?
Ok, i did fall down
but i really dont think so,
you stood over me, and said
"Yes you did"!.

i said "no i didnt,
i just came down here
to see
what it was like to feel
a life rain down on me!."

and with that i turned a tulip
and drank from its cup,
saw sunshine face with laughter
you said, "want up!?"

"no my dear Steph, i like being a plant!.!.!.
well OK i guess! i'm seeing all your Ants!!"

We laughed hard that day
it's one thing i remember
a drink from the tulips
and a smile looking up!.

Ok, i still fall down,
purely as laughter,
but always get picked up
everytime after!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It's sweet!Www@QuestionHome@Com

A great read, weird, but great! I only felt two places that might be somewhat suspect to meter!. Nicely done, farmerman!Www@QuestionHome@Com

OMG i really like it because it has dialog in it! No matter what you change about it in th future, please dont change the title I LOVE THE TITLEWww@QuestionHome@Com

I'm going to listen to you and drink from tulips from now on!.Www@QuestionHome@Com