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Question: What would you say composes is a fruitful life!?
This is juiced a passing phase folks - do not fruit!.!.!.!.er I mean fret!.
Fruity Jayku
by Jellz Fisher 080811
Pretending it’s “fine”
When it’s all gone so pear-shaped
Not a fruitful life
“Hey, she’ll be apples”
Man, are you out of your tree!?
Gets under my skin!
Take pithy on me
Leaving no stone unturned yet
Re-juiced to bad taste
Life give you lemons!?
Make a whisky sour
Sounds more appealing!
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
well i liked it though i feel you left me hungry and confused lol good luckWww@QuestionHome@Com
Pithy is hereby granted
albeit verse is slanted
But whiskey with lemon!?
a drink for a demon!
Is pithy a is or is pithy a are!.!.!.!.!.hmmm!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Very creative, you Fruit Loop!
;-)
Interesting, I must admitWww@QuestionHome@Com
how about "peeling all my skin!"
and
"leaving no pit to spit"
lol
i liked it Jellz!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Very fruity poem, juiced with the Fruit of the Tree of Knowledge!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
nice Jayku's!.!.!.pithy granted (I still say it's the water!.!.!.)hee!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Nice and fruity, I liked itWww@QuestionHome@Com