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Question: What is your interpretation of this poem I wrote/what are your thoughts on it!?
I haven't done this before, but I would like to have some opinions!.
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walking down a road of
smoke and needles
with only a pair of socks
and lips to cover your own mouth
you're not sure the difference between too much and enough
so it can't hurt, a little more
It's the illusion
the hollowed out field of flowers and life
but you are just
too far gone
when there is finally no difference
between what's killing you
and what's keeping you alive
once you've been spared
understand you haven't been forgiven
understand, and maybe
you can find it in your own heart
to let yourself
start over
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
All I can say right now is WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWW! I love writing too but that like tops everything I've ever done and squashes it!. Hm!.!. To me its talking about loss!.!.!. maybe of a family member or someone you loved!.!.!. but everyone interprets poetry differently!.
But I have to say, keep on going! Because you are an absolutely AMAZING writer and you could have a lot of success in that!. You have a lot of natural talent!. Use it wisely!.
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I read it twice and have no clue what you are trying to say!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
what is this poem really about!.Www@QuestionHome@Com