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Decemberia

I feel this thickening
My life is freezing
White is bitter cold

Time is sickening
And love is snapping
And the darkness become old

When the white became the elder
Of the story of white powder breeze
And the dark became the lover
Of the darkness and loving tease

And winter whispers a spell
To the sun to go hide away
And the moon to caress the earth
With tears of freezing rain

My breaths are lifting
My skin is pale
Skin becomes looser
As we start to inhale

Times like these are the hardest
When the air is so cold on our backs
And when time on the clock skips a beat
We find ourselves tracing back

This is the sickness of Winter
This is the sickness of cold
This is the loveless December
And the simplest lies are told

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