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Question: Is this poem any good
No smoke without you, my fire!.
After you left,
your cigarette glowed on in my ashtray
and sent up a long thread of such quiet grey
I smiled to wonder who would believe its signal
of so much love!. One cigarette
in the non-smoker's tray!.
As the last spire
trembles up, a sudden draught
blows it winding into my face!.
Is it smell, is it taste!?
You are here again, and I am drunk on your tobacco lips!.
Out with the light!.
Let the smoke lie back in the dark!.
Till I hear the very ash
sigh down among the flowers of brass
I'll breathe, and long past midnight, your last kiss!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
This is!.!.!. One Cigarette by Edwin Morgan
He's a very graphic, descriptive poet!. He paints amazing picutres with his words!.!. the line "I am drunk on your tobacco lips" is actually the way that I feel about "my true love"!.!.!.
Love can be very intoxicating!.
More directly to answer your question, yes!.!.!.!. this poem is "smoking"!!
Temari
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edwin morgan!. loser hahahaWww@QuestionHome@Com
its okayi guess but how does ttobaccoand love mix!? (even though iI'ma smoker) u mus love this gyal ey!?!Www@QuestionHome@Com