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Position:Home>Poetry> Just a poem that actually has to do with my disorder. It's not great, but thQuestion: Just a poem that actually has to do with my disorder!. It's not great, but the meaning can make up for it!. She once was a person
Happy and free That was the way It was meant to be Later in life Something came about Not understandable Affecting her throughout It may have been disorder Or maybe just a phase Whatever this may be Is numbering her daysWww@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I'm glad you find relief and a sort of realease in writing this, but it's very typical, use more personification/metaphors/ and other literary devices to represent how the disease affected you, use your emotions and imagination!. this was just bland and to the point!.!.!.for example She was once a person, wearing blue laced gold Happy, Free, The life that couldn't be bought, or sold So full of spice, like the way children play pretend Or how The stars grew bright into a lovely bend thanks Www@QuestionHome@Com i think this is actually pretty good, i like how it has a rhythm to it (i have no idea if i spelled that right) and it has a lot of feeling in it!. it's really goodWww@QuestionHome@Com omg great poem!!! good job thats exactly how i feel i think its extremly good becuz i cud relateeWww@QuestionHome@Com the poem!.!.amazin! and as for u finding release and therapy in writing!.!.!.even better! keep it up!. u r an amzing writer!.Www@QuestionHome@Com its so good :) Www@QuestionHome@Com |