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Question: Will we go round in circles!?

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Staring at the base of the wall
Awed by the task that lay ahead
In my mind it looked so small
Now I’m struck with fear and dread

I knew it was something that I could do
My plan was so neatly laid
Or did I bite more than I could chew
What was this choice that I made

A simple life with a simple plan
It was an easy choice for me
For I thought I was a simple man
How wrong could I possibly be

Like all people I had thoughts and dreams
Wondrous words marched through my head
Dragged myself through my plots and schemes
Not unscathed but still not dead

I wonder if I’ll pass this test
Will I know if I succeed
How do I try and judge my success
Is it measured in how much I bleed

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
wow thats a good poem!!!!
did u make it up by urself if u did bravo!!! Www@QuestionHome@Com

The wall is not so daunting
nor the path ahead
put your best foot forward
in an even steady tread!.

Simplicity in Essenes is not
what it might seem
especially when the words fall out
in a steady stream

The best made plans
are often not
the ones that lead us
or direct the plot!.

The test you passed
You did succeed
So surely you
Don't have to bleed!.

!.!.could not resist the words coming casually to my fingertips as my creative juices have been quite minimal of late!.

I enjoy your poem very much


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Life is never simple,
Nor was it meant to be,
For there are many hurdles
Of which you will agree!.

Each one a little higher as
we pass along Lifes way,
At times we feel
like turning back
but know thats not the way!.

So struggle on
Is what we do,
In our search
for survival!.

And when we know,
We've done our best
Tis then we know we've
passed the test,
And are no longer,
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Simple words, stated simply, but carrying a message deep!.

No, I predict you will go straight ahead, full steam matey!.!.!.!.!.no more circles for you! Keep taking the spinach supplements Popeye! Strong man of letters!. (that was letters, not lettuce!)

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Isn't that the eternal question!? How do you write of passion, love, danger, horror without a little experience, even if it is vicarious!. And HP, you were never a simple man!.!.!.hee!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

well : it is simple Poetry that has been written of course I
know one you would read from Arts & Humanities
best Pomes By Robert Frost yes he wrote alot as a Author Www@QuestionHome@Com

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