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Question: What is a good way to lift wieght!?
Escapism 101

The needle slips in
I check out
The feelings begin
I have no doubt

That for a few hours
I have super powers
Invisible to past pain
In here safe I remain

This hell I’m escaping
My soul I am raping
With balls of steel
Nothing do I feel

I build these walls to protect me
Unaware of the weaknesses
Blind to the fissures
And with time
Slowly
The mortar crumbles
Brick by tear washed brick
They all come crashing down
All alone now
I am picking up the pieces

Life 1 on 1

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Put me down for 2 points please!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Obviously people are not getting the point of "lifting weight" The weight meaning sadness, anger, unhappiness etc!.!. and the best way of doing that without delving into self destructive behavior

I think you could still tweak this poem up a bit, I like it--but it feels a bit disjointed here and there

From your dark friend DL, I hope all is well with youWww@QuestionHome@Com

you carry it carefully, one piece at a time!. There is a proverb from India
"A lazy man will carry a mountain" None can accuse you of laziness!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You ask how to lift "wieght", and then give us a poem about heroin!? What do I answer!? If you meant "weight", then with a forklift!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I wrote this poem
for the amount of points - 2
And to give me best answer
Would be very kind of you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Dreams and realities circle each other like vultures!.!.!.each waiting to tear the other apart!.!.!.one, grace!.!.!.one, vulgar!.
But, which is which!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think it needs more weight!. but that's just me!. Www@QuestionHome@Com