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Far Over The Hill

She sits in complete silence,
thinking only in her head!.
Still she worries
and thinks of what shes said!.
She cries tears of regret,
though never looking back!.
She knows what she has to do,
to get back on track!.

She'll change whats shes made
of herself and her life!.
She'll change the mistakes
she thought would go right!.
She'll change all the things
shes ever done and said!.
She'll change what she thinks
deep inside her creative head!.

Her heart rules her head,
these feelings must be real!.
She knows somethings wrong,
and there is no strong appeal!.
She'll confront him of her feelings,
and make him confess,
to what hes thinking and all the rest!.

Things will change!.
She knows they will!.
Things will be alright
from here and far over the hill!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
wow, that was incredible!
it was so powerful, and it was pretty easy to understand!
keep writing, you have a gift :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Its beautiful! Did you write more, if so, please email them to me, I would love to read them! Great Job!


Answer mine!?
http://answers!.yahoo!.com/question/index!?!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

That was awesome!. Keep them coming!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

amazing!
i write too!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

very good!.
i like it!.
yes, keep writing!Www@QuestionHome@Com