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Position:Home>Poetry> Ever feel like you can't do right by anyone? Thoughts?Question: Ever feel like you can't do right by anyone!? Thoughts!? Dedicated to my "Master"!. 8 hours a day 5 days a week
Voodoo Another needle In my side Make it deep I cannot hide The metal pin I need to feel pierce my mind make it real Silver sliver Stab my heart Drive it in I played a part Tear my stitches throw me down I can take it I’ll make no sound Set on fire My muslin soul threads on fire burning holes In your hands Gripping tight Make me bleed Until it’s right Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Marie Laveaux You know she know She told me so Set fire to it all Everyone must fall I can hear her call I walk on pins and needles I walk on guilded splinters I walk with your hand on mine Oh Yeah DL!.!.!.!.!.Hit some nerves this time!.!.!. Pssst!.!.!.I think you'll like my last post "Ode to Mrs!. Bridge!.!.!.!.Have you ever been down Bayou LaFourche!?" Www@QuestionHome@Com heres the thing friend!. this life is about us and our happiness!. so unless we love our selves and think were good enough then we wont ever do right by anyone!. life is good the world is good and if you find that good in you and that joy you'll be unstoppable!. this world is product of our thought so if you wanna improve your relationship with others you need to turn with in your self and tel your self how good you are and only be positive!.!.!. hope this helpsWww@QuestionHome@Com "Hi!", I have never used Voodoo!. I believe in a lot of things but can't say I am a great believer in Voodoo!. My friend has done it before though when she was younger!. I really loved the flow of your poem and thought that the poem itself was great, It's obvious that your describing your emotions through the way you would use a voodoo doll I gather!. WELL DONE! Cheers : ) Www@QuestionHome@Com Very New Orleans, indeed!. Went to Madame L's tomb several times!. Interesting poem, tight, almost wrenching, prayer, and not just to the Voodoo Gods, either!.Www@QuestionHome@Com No never quite felt that way LOL, but can I borrow the voo doo doll, got some plans for it! Just Kidding! Really well written poem, I really liked it, CheersWww@QuestionHome@Com ouch it made me hurt!. Its good but freaky!. I`ve always been scared of voodoo dolls and stuff!. Who`s you master; your boss!?Www@QuestionHome@Com Its all in the mind!.!.perhaps you are an introvert!.Www@QuestionHome@Com yeaWww@QuestionHome@Com That is a very strong poem!. i like it a lot!. i think its awesome!. keep writing!. I'd love to hear some moreWww@QuestionHome@Com Hi Dragon Lady, I go to Mardi Gras every other year because it's like I always say, you CAN have too much of a good thing! I would always get my fortune read at Marie Laveau's House Of Voodoo on Bourbon Street!. For the life of me I don't know why they call it a fortune telling, $10 dollars ain't THAT much money!.!.!.lol!! Enjoy!.!.!. VOODOO DOLL Another needle in my side Inside this haunted room alone, I must open my mind's third eye The piercing pain so close to home You have me in your clutches tight Run the sharp silver through my soul, Revenge will be so sweet tonight So die with every dark secret you know RELEASE Everything we do in life is costly Everybody has to pay a price, How many times have you begged for mercy!? Yet still you have to sacrifice We try to keep our troubles hidden Stay silent as a voodoo doll, So now you want to be forgiven Like nothing ever happened at all!.!.!. The cloth that covers up my face In a likeness that is almost real My nose can't smell My lips can't taste But to you it's immaterial You're no different from all the rest Sit at the table wondering, You poke these pins right through my chest Cause someone needs a little suffering RELEASE Everything we do in life is costly Everybody has to pay a price, How many times have you begged for mercy!? Yet still you have to sacrifice We try to keep our troubles hidden Stay silent as a voodoo doll, So now you want to be forgiven Like nothing ever happened at all!.!.!. VIBRATING ACCAPELLA I'll be your little voodoo doll (!.!.!.doll!.!.!.doll!.!.!.doll!.!.!.) I'll watch your madness churn a raging sea I'll be your little voodoo doll (!.!.!.doll!.!.!.doll!.!.!.doll!.!.!.) You can take your anger out on me I'll be you little voodoo doll I'll never shed your blinding tears, I want to be you voodoo doll The drink that washed away the bitter years Voodoo doll!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |