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jezebel

wise woman once told me i was a queen
they said my smile shines and my walk is mean
they told me stories of bodies they sell
they bought me a silk dress and called me jezebel
they took me into the streets where i met a man named fred
he bought me a drink then took me to bed
he said
jezebel jezebel your juices are flowing
jezebel jezebel your body is glowing
my mother once gave me lipstick and heels
she told me when you see a fellow bow down and kneel
for he has money and gold for days
so jezebel just play the game he plays
then he says
jezebel jezebel your juices are flowing
jezebel jezebel your body is glowing
my daughter once told me i was a hag
she said my heart is worthless and my body was a bag
she couldnt look at me in the eyes
she made me cry
when she said
jezebel jezebel your juices are flowing
jezebel jezebel your body is glowingWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It was well worth reading!.
It was also deep, yet somehow remaining shallow!.
Great message, great meter, great job!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

yes its very entertaining but you might want to do a poem that dosnt rhym because sometimes that gives it much more meaning!. did you write this peom!?
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It's a very sad poem!. (I mean sad like crying, not like crap!)Www@QuestionHome@Com